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中学英语写作例讲

时间:2007-4-27栏目:英语论文

    An English lecture competition, the multi-functional classroom, hold, challenge the future,
title, fluent English, ashamed, study hard to improve my English
第三步:
    将这些关键词串联成句、组成文,完成后仔细检查是否有错误。
    This afternoon an English lecture competition, whose title is Challenge the Future, was held in the multi-functional classroom. The competitors gave wonderful lectures in fluent English and won thunderous applauses.
    Compared with their English, I felt ashamed of my poor English. So I’ve made up my mind to study hard and I’m sure I can speak English as well as they do someday.

【习作点评】

写作要求:
请就下面故事写一篇120字左右的短文。
    从前,遥远山庄有一少年,酷爱读书。然而因家境贫寒,无钱买书。他听说远方有一户富人家收藏着各种书籍,乐交诚实少年。于是,少年长途跋涉,借书求知。富人说:“只要爱护书籍,及时交还,可随意借书”。
    历时多年,少年总是及时读完所借书籍,从不延迟交还。就这样,该少年博览群书,长大后成了大科学家。
习作原文:
    There was once an honest boy in a far away① mountain village. He was very fond of reading.But his family was too poor to buy him any books. Far away from the village there lived a rich man who had a library in which he kept all kinds of books. This man liked honest teenagers. When the boy learned it②, he walked a long way to visit him and asked the rich man to borrow③ him some books. “You can borrow any books as you like if only you keep them clean and return them on time④,” the man said.
    For many years the boy always finished to read⑤ the books in a given time and was never late in returning them back⑥. In this way the boy read a lot of books and when he grew up, he became a great scientist.
点评:
    本文写出了全部要点,层次分明,语言通顺,复合句用得不错。但有几处语法错误:①把 far away 改为faraway。faraway是形容词,意为“遥远的”,只能作前置定语,不能作状语。far away是固定词组,意为“很远”,只能作表语、状语和后置定语,如第4句。②it 改为 this。 it 代替前面提到的名词,而且与前面的名词指同一物。this 代替上文的内容。③把 borrow 改为 lend 。因为borrow 是“借入”,而 lend 是“借出”。④把 on time 改为 in time 。on time 是“准时”,指正好在规定的时间内,既不迟,也不早。in time 是“及时”,指按照预定的时间还有富余,可做些别的事情。⑤to read 改为 reading。 finish后只能用v-ing形式作宾语,不可用不定式作宾语。 finish reading意为“读完”。⑥把 back 去掉。因 return 意为“归还(give sth back)”。

【习作练兵】

1. 请根据中文提示,用英语写出下列故事。
    有位妇女心脏病犯了,去看医生。这位大夫是新来的,并不认识她。于是先问了她一些问题。其中一个问题是:“你多大岁数?” 她答道:“大夫,我记不起来了,我得好好想想。”她想了一会儿,然后说:“我现在想起来了,结婚时,我是18岁,我丈夫30岁。现在我丈夫60岁,这正好是30岁的两倍。所以我现在是18岁的两倍,那就是36岁。对吗?”
词数:100左右。
2. 请根据以下提示,写一篇120字左右的英文短文,介绍你的暑假生活。
  (1) 与祖父母在农村住了半个月;
  (2) 山和田野绿树成荫;
  (3) 有时去村西的小河洗澡,河水清澈;
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bsp; (4) 每天写日记
  (5) 除了干农活以外,还帮助邻居的孩子补课;
  (6) 孩子们对英语感兴趣,读和写较好,但听不懂简单的英语。你每天早上帮他们提高听力和口语,他们进步很大;
  (7) 孩子们的家长赞扬你;
  (8) 农村需要知识。
                                                                                       
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