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时间:2006-11-26栏目:医学论文写作方法

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健康网讯:

  1、医药科技工作者撰写医药论文时一般要求附英文摘要,英文摘要写得准确与



否,很大程度上体现了作者的学术水平,也与论文的影响力有很大关系。我们有幸



从《医药导报》杂志社获取了相当数量论文的英文摘要原稿。该刊特邀英文校译—



—同华中科技大学同济医学院冯新为教授,年逾九旬仍伏案笔耕,为这些稿件做了



大量细致深入的校译工作,可谓句句汗水字字珠玑。给医药科技论文英文摘要的写



作提供了一个范本,对广大医药科技工作者来说也是一次极其珍贵的学习机会。本



刊特辑录刊载其原文及冯教授所作修正、点评,以飨读者。



   2、编制体例:本文按照原文、修正、点评次序编写;修改、插入处以黑体斜体



,删节处附括号说明,如有点评附上标数字注明。







1、 原文:



Determination of Gallic Acid in Zhixueting Liquids by TLC Scanning



ZHOU Qun1, XU La-ying2 (1. Department of Pharmacology, Tongji Medical C



ollege, Huazhong University of Science and Technology, Wuhan 430030, Ch



ina; 2.The Faculty of Pharmacy, Hubei College of Traditional Chinese Me



dicine, Wuhan 430061,China)



ABSTRACT Objective: To determine the content of gallic acid in Zhixueti



ng liquids. Methods: Zhixueting liquids were dissolved by distilled wat



er, and then extracted into the sample with butanal etc. The samples we



re determinated by TLC scanning (λS=280nm,λR=350nm). Result: The aver



age recovery rate was 96.36% and RSD=2.39%. The contents of gallic acid



 in 3 five batches of samples were 0.38,0.42 and 0.47mg/ml. Conclusion:



 The method is simple, convenient and available.



KEY WORDS TLC Scanning; Zhixueting liquids; Determination; Gallic acid



修正:



Determination of Gallic Acid in Chuxueting1 oral Liquids by TLC Scannin



g



ZHOU Qun1, XU La-ying2 (1. School of Pharmacy2, Tongji Medical College,



 Huazhong University of Science and Technology, Wuhan 430030, China; 2.



The Faculty of Pharmacy, Hubei College of Traditional Chinese Medicine,



 Wuhan 430061,China)



Abstract Objective: To determine the content of gallic acid in Chuxueti



ng oral Liquids. Methods: The Chuxueting oral Liquid was dissolved in d



istilled water, and then extracted (into the sample删去) with water-s



aturaled n-butanol3 etc. for the preparation of samples. The samples we



re subjected to gallic acid determination by TLC scanning (λS=280nm,λ



R=350nm). Results: The average rate of recovery was 96.36%,(and删去) 



RSD=2.39%. The contents of gallic acid in 3 (five删去) batches of sam



ples were 0.38,0.42 and 0.47mg/ml respectively. Conclusion: The method 



is simple, convenient and feasible.



KEY WORDS TLC Scanning; Chuxueting oral Liquids; Determination; Gallic 



acid



点评:



1、zhixueting 应为“止血停”而非“出血停”,自相矛盾。“出血停”也可译为



hemorrhage-stopping,以方便国外读者理解。



2、school可作“(大学里的)院”解,原意是“药学院”,而非“药理教研室”



,故改之。



3、斜体n表示“正”。







2、原文:



Content Determination of Emodin in Qingre Mingmu Capsules



LUO Ming-zhu1, ZHANG Hong2 (1.Hubei Provice Institute of Drug Control, 



Wuhan 430030, China; 2.The 75310 Medical Team of the Army)



ABSTRACT Objectives: To determination content of Emodin in Qingre Mingm



u Capsules. Methods: Tlcs was used, silica gel Tlc plate, developing so



lvent was Benzene-Ethyl fermate-formic acid-Methanol-water(3:1:0.05:0.1



:0.5) of which the upper solutionλS=435nm,λR=530nm. Result: The linea



r relationship of sample application which ranged between 0.168-3.09μg



 was good. The regression equation was below: Y=105417.7X-1115.6, r=0.9



995; arerage recovery 

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