A Beggar-一个乞丐
。描写文的写作一般要按一定的空间顺序组织，如：从上到下、从里到外、从远到近等，使文章显得更有条理。此外，在描写人物时，要抓住其最主要的特征，避免面面俱到。
本文在语言表达上的一大特色是词汇丰富而准确。如bony(cheeks)，thin(neck)，bedraggled(hair)，gnarled(hand)，stretching，twisting，intersecting(wrinkles)，dilapidated(bowl)等。作者还恰如其分地运用了一些修辞手法，特别是比喻，如His hair is bedraggled like a nest，a nest with a coat Of oil；there is a stick as slim as his legs;he will keep nodding his head slightly and auto matically as if a gust of wind had forced it to do so.
本文在语言表达上的一大特色是词汇丰富而准确。如bony(cheeks)，thin(neck)，bedraggled(hair)，gnarled(hand)，stretching，twisting，intersecting(wrinkles)，dilapidated(bowl)等。作者还恰如其分地运用了一些修辞手法，特别是比喻，如His hair is bedraggled like a nest，a nest with a coat Of oil；there is a stick as slim as his legs;he will keep nodding his head slightly and auto matically as if a gust of wind had forced it to do so.
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